WALT: use commores to separate list of ideas and every idea starts with a verb and a past-tence
The Chile soccer team are an awesome team because they can pass the ball to their team-mates really well. They can run,run,kick,defend and pass. They do really cool moves with the ball. They won the Copa America for the first time in history. It was the best moment of there life. They always will remember that day. They're an awesome team. I will always support them.
This week our class have a competition of taking care of an egg buddy it's for our Topic Me To We.
I had a shoe box for my eggs home she was called Meggie but unfortunately she died in the first day i put patting around the shoe box.
I think i was a bad parent but i'll get better you get prizes if you can make your egg survive for a week but we don't know
what the prizes are.
I believe that santa should not shave his beard.
Firstly all the kids that believe in Santa won't anymore because everyone knows that Santa has a beard. They will think theres a stranger sneaking into the house from the chimney in the middle of the night.
Secondly kids will think that it was never real it was just to believe in magic and they will find out it was their parents and Ms Claus is there mother.
Thirdly they will start to believe that the EasterBunny and the ToothFairy were never real and it was their parents.
Therefore I think Santa should not shave his beard for all the reasons above.
The Chile soccer team are an awesome team because they can pass the ball to their team-mates really well. They can run,run,kick,defend and pass. They do really cool moves with the ball. They won the Copa America for the first time in history. It was the best moment of there life. They always will remember that day. They're an awesome team. I will always support them.
